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There used to be a girl
Who I'd talk to everyday
We always had a laugh
And had so much to say

But one day she dissapeared
Just vanished into mid-air
I don't know where she went
It's as if she was never there

A long time later she came back
But she was a subject of change
She was like a different person
Even her touch felt strange

Everytime I see her now
I think back to how it used to be
Now she has returned however
She barely even remembers me

There is a girl I know
Who I see everyday
But we no longer talk
As we have nothing to say
I've actually been thinking about writing this for the past couple of days after I thought of the first stanza. Only came up with the rest earlier today.

Enjoy!

Edit: OMG!! I never expected this response from people. I can't even keep up with all the favourites!! I would like to thank everyone here for all the faves and comments and whatever else you may do. (I tried thanking everyone individual but due to the amount of comments, dA though I was spamming >.<
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hsallard Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I love this!!!!! Heh I have a question though.
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks, and sure.. go ahead?
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hsallard Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Heh welcome and is it like saying that a person left and came back and they had completely changed or...?
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yes, it's about having a friend that 'left', and then changed completely, then 'came back' and was just a different person almost.
A true story.
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hsallard Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Oh, I see now heh. I had that happen to me too.
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It totally sucks :/
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:iconhsallard:
hsallard Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
It does
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WhaleTails Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
Wow. I love this!! Very relatable :) And very nice writting skills too :) Great job!
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you (:
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WhaleTails Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
No problem :)
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