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There used to be a girl
Who I'd talk to everyday
We always had a laugh
And had so much to say

But one day she dissapeared
Just vanished into mid-air
I don't know where she went
It's as if she was never there

A long time later she came back
But she was a subject of change
She was like a different person
Even her touch felt strange

Everytime I see her now
I think back to how it used to be
Now she has returned however
She barely even remembers me

There is a girl I know
Who I see everyday
But we no longer talk
As we have nothing to say
I've actually been thinking about writing this for the past couple of days after I thought of the first stanza. Only came up with the rest earlier today.

Enjoy!

Edit: OMG!! I never expected this response from people. I can't even keep up with all the favourites!! I would like to thank everyone here for all the faves and comments and whatever else you may do. (I tried thanking everyone individual but due to the amount of comments, dA though I was spamming >.<
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MissMiscellaneous Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015
Oh my gosh...This is kind of sad. I like it though.
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Aye it is, but thank you :)
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hsallard Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I love this!!!!! Heh I have a question though.
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks, and sure.. go ahead?
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hsallard Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Heh welcome and is it like saying that a person left and came back and they had completely changed or...?
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yes, it's about having a friend that 'left', and then changed completely, then 'came back' and was just a different person almost.
A true story.
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hsallard Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Oh, I see now heh. I had that happen to me too.
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It totally sucks :/
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:iconhsallard:
hsallard Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
It does
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WhaleTails Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
Wow. I love this!! Very relatable :) And very nice writting skills too :) Great job!
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you (:
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WhaleTails Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
No problem :)
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much!!! :)
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
You're welcome.
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Rumor-the-Mirage Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nicely written. Great poem, dude!
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot :)
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I love it :D I can relate to this....oh how I can relate...
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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TangerineTerranova Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AMAZING!!!! :O
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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TheAfterShock Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Student General Artist
Man, seriously.... I friggin' connect with this so much.
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's tough to go through ):
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TheAfterShock Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Student General Artist
*nods head in agreement* seriously.
PS: this may sound dense... are you talking about a "Break-up" or a friend?
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It was a friend that I'm talking about in this one.
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TheAfterShock Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Student General Artist
Okay. Then, I can DEFINETLY connect to it.
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha, it sucks doesn't it?
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TheAfterShock Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Student General Artist
A lot. Especially when you're with her a lot...
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's even worse :/
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livinittothemaxx Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Student General Artist
i can really relate to this, thank you
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No, Thank you for viewing, commenting and favouriting :)
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LeNlUvScAkE Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I had friends who changed and isn't my friend anymore I understand this poem because they ended up not talking to me anymore last year
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, I'm sorry :(
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LeNlUvScAkE Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's okay It's a good poem ^^
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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LeNlUvScAkE Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome ^^
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xXTheSceneIsDeadXx Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Student General Artist
i love it i would so read it if it were a book
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ^^
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xXTheSceneIsDeadXx Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Student General Artist
your so very welcome!)
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BirthByShadows Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice!
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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BirthByShadows Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem! Keep up the great work =D
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zottekke9 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
Story of my life here. A beautiful poem, seriously :)
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ;0
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zottekke9 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
You're welcome!
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Scheifen Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this so much!

I know you're getting swamped with responses, but just want you to know that it is truly lovely ^_^
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much ^^
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xMEDZx Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I. Can't. Comment. D:

I'd say something about the poem, but all has been said. So i'll say it again, in a different way.


This is an amazing poem. I can feel as if there is a dark shadow behind it, the shadow of memory. It's heartfelt and powerful. The hidden sadness can crush a person when undiscovered, luckily i'm smart enough not to dig any further.

Now i can only think about how much I have changed since i last saw my best friend, over three years ago.
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I understand xD thank you! :)
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xMEDZx Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for understanding. :iconhappyiamplz:

No problemo~~
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