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Lurking in shadows,
Stalking his prey,
He leaps from his viewpoint,
Into the hay.

With silent footsteps,
He follows nearby,
Gently pushing his way,
Knowing who will die.

The soon to be victim,
Stops and turns,
And of his fate,
He quickly learns.

His arms wide open,
Welcoming death,
The hooded man strolls forward,
With a short, quiet breath.

The blade, thin and sharp,
Slid into the mans throat,
A gargle was made,
Silenced by a nearby goat.

As quickly as that,
The man dropped to the floor,
The hooded man was gone,
As guards came through a door.

'Who did this?!' they yelled,
Looking at the wound below his chin,
Only one thought came to mind,
That was the thought, of the Assassin.
Based on the game, Assassin's Creed, kind of.

A little different than what I have written before, but I still hope you like it :)

Some of the lines may sound stupid, like the goat bit, only because I was trying to rhyme as much as possible.
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randomguy2812 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Awesome!
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! (:
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randomguy2812 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014
You are welcome
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
The goat line was alright to me but the last rhyme for some reason didn't quite flow. Maybe it's just me though. As soon as I read the first part I knew it had to be about the game so you did a wonderful job conveying his character; his swift and sure movements. Although I've never played the game I have seen the trailers for it and this just fits. :)
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HellzAssassin Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nice Poem!
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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BullSwag Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconiloveitplz:
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha, thanks :)
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BullSwag Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problemo :3
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tarrey Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012
nicely done with the rhyme scheme.
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:iconalexakaducky:
AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :)
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tarrey Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
you're welcome. Hey check out my Assassin's Creed New Generations fanfic. Let me know how you like it.
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:iconalexakaducky:
AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Will do when I can :)
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NashIsYoDaddy Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011
Dat goat
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
xD
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NarineFox Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's amazing ^_________^
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:iconalexakaducky:
AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ^^
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Buuber Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011
Awesome O: You have nice style :D
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :) This is actually different to the other things I have written :)
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Kayo96 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome ^^ I really love this ^^
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:iconalexakaducky:
AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :)
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Kayo96 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
you're very welcome ^^
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AtomicArtistOW Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Student Digital Artist
How do you even upload poems? :)
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
When you upload a new piece of art, select 'add text' and then type it out. That's all you need to do :)
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AtomicArtistOW Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Okay thanks. I might try it out sometime ;)
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
go for it :)
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AtomicArtistOW Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I will :)
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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mscaspercat1 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011
This is brilliant XD keep it up XD
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much :)
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mscaspercat1 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011
np XD
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AtomicArtistOW Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Really amazing!
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :)
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YoshiKyubi Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful. <3
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:iconalexakaducky:
AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :) and for the fav too! :)
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YoshiKyubi Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
^w^
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011   General Artist
i really like this Alex. Especially the last line. You should send it to them and they can use it in their ad campaign
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
haha, I doubt that Ubisoft would do anything with this. But thanks :)
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Rifle1980 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011   General Artist
well it makes me want to play it! :D
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You should. It's an amazing game! :)
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