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There's something about you
But I can't put my finger on it
You're different from the rest
But in a good way
I don't know what it is about you
But you pull me in
Maybe it's your eyes, full of happiness
Or your long, wavy hair
It could even be your smile
One that is so big and bright
I don't understand why I feel like this
Every time I see you, talk to you
Or even just imagine you with me
My heart races 10x fast
It only happens when I think of you
You entice me, make me happy
And most of all, you love me back
That must be it.. No one else could love me back as much as you do
No one else would put up with me
I guess that's also why I love you so much too
I'm glad you're different from the rest
Because compared to you, the rest are like clouds in the sky
All pretty much the same and something you see every day
Please stay different from the rest
And please stay with me too.
I love you.
Started writing with something in mind, then just let my thoughts dictate what was written.
For my girlfriend. I love her so much.

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NashIsYoDaddy Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012
Whoa ok I got rid of my long wavy hair the end of year 10 so calm yo tits and I do not love you back in a gay way but in a bro way my god calm it down alex your ruing my street cred man
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TristenCoy Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student General Artist
So I am just rereading some of your poems and wow... They still make me smile so much (: YOU make me smile so much (: You are different from all the rest, and I love that (: I love everything about you (: You're so good to me and you fascinate me so much! Have I ever told you that? I can't help but to smile everytime I see your face and hear your voice (: You even make my heart smile! If only it had a face xD You're so amazing Alex, and I am the luckiest girl alive and to be the girl you love (: I love you so much! With all my heart (x :heart: :iconhugheartplz:
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I make YOU Smile? pfft.. just reading that made me smile! Literally everything you just said there also applies to yourself though, as the poem suggests ^^
And yes, when I see you, and hear you speak, I can't help but think how great you are and how beautiful you are.. I love you so much. And although I can't be with you, my heart is always with you. <3
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TristenCoy Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Student General Artist
That just made me smile so big xD And I am very happy that made you smile (: I can picture it too (: You looking at your laptop smiling (: Like when we're on webcam xD You and your pilot set xD Hehe xD And my heart will always be with you as well (: I love youuuu x) :huggle:
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey.. nothing wrong with looking like a pilot! >.<
But yes, that's what it was like.. sat here, smiling away xD
I LOVE YOU! :heart:
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NashIsYoDaddy Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
I got nothing for this one damn rent servers?
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You already commented on this once..
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NashIsYoDaddy Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
Now I feel clinically depressed time to get obese and drop out of priestley
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AlexAKADucky Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't be like 'her'!
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TristenCoy Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Student General Artist
That actually made my eyes water :') I love you so much!! :heart: :glomp: :smooch: :iconpenguinglompplz: :la: :aww:
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